ACT® · English: Topic Development — Relevance, Focus, and Deletion
Relevance Judged Against the Paragraph, Not the Essay (TOD 501)
A sentence can be true and on-topic for the whole essay and still be wrong where it sits, because each paragraph has its own narrower job that the sentence has to serve.
An essay has one overall focus, but it almost never tackles that focus all at once. It breaks the work into paragraphs, and each paragraph takes one slice of the job: design in one, cost in another, history in a third. That slice is the paragraph's focus, and it is narrower than the essay's focus. A sentence can pass the essay-level test - it is true, it is on the essay's general subject - and still fail the paragraph-level test, because the paragraph was never assigned to cover that slice.
The fix is to name the paragraph's job in plain words before judging any sentence inside it. Read the paragraph, ask what single task it is doing - describing a design, reporting work completed, giving a history - and hold every sentence against that task alone, ignoring whether the sentence is interesting or accurate. If a sentence does a different paragraph's job instead, it gets cut from here even though the information itself might belong somewhere else in the essay.
This sits right before questions about deletion, which is really just this same judgment pushed one step further: once you see a sentence fits the wrong paragraph, deleting it is usually cleaner than trying to rework it into fitting. The two skills share one test - name the paragraph's job, then check the sentence against that job, not against the essay's title or general topic.
Key terms
- Essay focus
- The single overall idea or purpose that every paragraph in the essay is meant to serve.
- Paragraph focus
- The narrower, specific job one paragraph is doing within the essay's larger focus.
- Relevance
- Whether a sentence serves the job of the paragraph it sits in, not just the essay's general topic.
- Deletion
- Removing a sentence that fails the paragraph's job, even if it would fit a different paragraph.
Watch it explained
- How it worksHow does each paragraph carry its own smaller focus nested inside the essay's focus?
- How it worksWalk me through naming a paragraph's job before deciding whether a sentence serves that job.
- Worked exampleFind where a sentence about funding belongs when paragraph two covers design and paragraph three covers cost.
- Common mistakeWhy doesn't a true, on-topic sentence belong in whichever paragraph mentions its subject first?
Check yourself
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