AP® English Language and Composition · Big Idea 3

5.C Developing Ideas Through Comparison and Contrast (REO-1.K)

Comparison and contrast builds an argument by measuring two subjects on the same shared category, then arranging those matched points either in two blocks or criterion by criterion so the reader sees what the differences prove.

Comparing two things only works if you first pick a category both can answer on equal terms. Fare per rider is a category both bus systems have. A fare and an entire budget are not the same category, so lining them up proves nothing about which city runs things better. Once the shared category is set, a writer has two ways to lay the comparison on the page. Block arrangement covers everything about subject one, then everything about subject two, so the reader finishes one full picture before starting the next. Point-by-point arrangement takes one criterion at a time and places both subjects side by side on it, then moves to the next criterion. Block arrangement suits short comparisons or ones building toward a single overall judgment. Point-by-point suits comparisons with several criteria, because it forces each pair of facts to sit next to each other instead of asking the reader to hold one subject's whole profile in memory while reading the other's.

A list of contrasts is not yet an argument. Naming that System A is funded by taxes and System B by private insurance, that A has longer waits, that B has pricier drugs, only reports facts. The paragraph still owes a claim: which of those differences actually matters for the point being argued, and which system that difference favors. Without that step, accurate contrasts just sit there unused. This is where comparison and contrast connects to the other methods of development nearby: like a chain of causes or a sorted set of bins, the structure only earns its place in an essay once it is pointed at a claim. When two things share no real common category, the comparison collapses entirely, and a writer needs a different method of development instead.

Key terms

shared category
A measure both subjects can be rated on, required before any comparison can mean anything.
block arrangement
Organizing a comparison by covering one subject fully, then the other subject fully.
point-by-point arrangement
Organizing a comparison by taking one criterion at a time and addressing both subjects on it before moving to the next.
category error
Comparing two quantities or ideas that belong to different kinds of measurement, making the comparison meaningless.

Watch it explained

  1. How it worksHow do block arrangement and point-by-point arrangement lay the same comparison out differently?
  2. Worked exampleFind the category error in weighing one city's bus fares against another city's whole transport budget.
  3. Common mistakeWhy isn't a list of differences between two things already an argument about either of them?
  4. Going furtherWhat happens to a comparison when the two objects share no like category to be measured on?

Check yourself

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An op-ed weighs City A's bus fare of 4 dollars against City B's entire transport budget of 654 million dollars and concludes that A runs the more efficient system. What has gone wrong?

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