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ACT® · English: Punctuation Conventions

Deleting Punctuation Around Essential Elements

Some clauses tell you which specific noun is meant, and those never take commas. If a comma pair blocks that identifying job, the commas have to go.

Commas around a clause announce that the clause is extra: the sentence would mean the same thing without it. That works fine for a noun that is already fully identified, like one person's name. But when a noun is a whole group or a vague category, like 'students' or 'the ones,' the sentence needs some clause to narrow it down to the specific ones meant. Put commas around that narrowing clause and you accidentally say the opposite: that the fact applies to the entire group, with the clause tossed in as a side note.

That is exactly the trap in 'Students, who cheat, will be expelled.' Read it without the clause: 'Students will be expelled.' That now claims every student gets expelled, which is not what the sentence wants. Strip the commas instead, 'Students who cheat will be expelled,' and the clause clamps onto 'students' and narrows it to just the cheaters. That strip-it-and-check move, the deletion test, is the reliable way to decide: if removing the clause changes who or what is being talked about, no commas; if removing it only loses detail, keep them.

The word 'who' never decides this by itself. A 'who' clause can go either way depending on the noun in front of it. A vague plural noun like 'students' or 'the ones' needs the clause to pin down a meaning, so no commas. A noun that already names one unique thing, like the Eiffel Tower, needs no narrowing, so any clause about it stays extra and keeps its commas. This same logic links to the companion skill of adding commas around true interrupters: both rest on one question, does the sentence still identify the same thing without the clause.

Key terms

essential clause
A clause that narrows a vague noun to a specific meaning and so takes no commas.
nonessential clause
A clause that adds extra detail to an already-identified noun and so needs commas.
deletion test
Removing a clause to see whether the sentence still identifies the same thing, which reveals if commas belong.
one-of-a-kind noun
A noun naming a single unique thing, like a specific proper name, that needs no narrowing clause.

Watch it explained

  1. How it worksHow does removing a comma pair fuse a clause onto its noun so it narrows which one is meant?
  2. How it worksWalk me through the deletion test: read a sentence without the clause and see whether the meaning survives.
  3. Common mistakeWhy isn't a clause beginning with 'who' automatically the kind that gets set off by commas?
  4. Going furtherWhat changes when the noun is a one-of-a-kind proper name like the Eiffel Tower?

Check yourself

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An essay reads: 'The handbook issued to all 2180 students warns that students, who cheat, will be expelled.' Which choice is best for the underlined portion, 'students, who cheat, will'?

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