AP® English Language and Composition · Big Idea 4 Style: Comparisons and Figurative Language (Skill 7.A)

7.A Personification

Personification gives a human trait, usually a motive or action, to something that cannot have one. In nonfiction arguments this is not decoration; it quietly relocates responsibility from people to things.

Personification works by laying a human face over something nonhuman: a market, an algorithm, a nation, an opposing movement. The market cannot panic. Panic is a feeling, and feelings need a nervous system. When a writer says the market panicked instead of traders panicked, the sentence still reports the same fall in price, but the grammar has moved the subject from a group of accountable people to an abstraction that cannot be questioned, fired, or sued. That is the real work of the move: it is not about vividness, it is about who the sentence lets off the hook.

Look at what disappears grammatically. The engineers decided to withhold the loan offers names authors who wrote a rule and could have written it differently. The algorithm decided keeps the same decision but deletes the engineers entirely, so the refusals arrive as if no one chose them. Readers cannot demand an answer from an algorithm. This is the mechanism behind every politically loaded use of personification: give the abstraction intention, and intention becomes impossible to locate in any one person afterward.

The same trick scales up to opposing sides in an argument. Calling a diverse coalition the opposition and giving it a single verb, it waits, it calculates, it never blinks, compresses many people with different reasons into one schemer with one motive, which is far easier to attack than a crowd. This connects personification to its neighbors in style: like metaphor and analogy, it overlays two pictures, but its particular danger in argument is erasing authorship and accountability rather than just drawing a comparison.

Key terms

Personification
Giving a nonhuman thing or abstraction human traits such as feelings, intentions, or actions.
Agency
The capacity to act and be held responsible for that action, which personification can transfer away from real people.
Abstraction
A concept or system, like the market or the algorithm, that has no body or mind of its own.
Erasure of authorship
The effect by which naming an abstraction as the actor removes the real people who made a decision from the sentence.

Watch it explained

  1. How it worksHow does giving an abstraction a face hand it intentions it cannot possibly have?
  2. Worked exampleShow me who disappears from the sentence when the algorithm decided replaces the engineers decided.
  3. Going furtherWhat happens when a writer personifies an opposing side as one single scheming person?
  4. Common mistakeWhy isn't personification only a poetry device with no place in serious nonfiction?

Check yourself

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A report on a 19 percent fall over 7 days says 'the market panicked' rather than 'traders panicked'. What does the substitution accomplish?

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