AP® English Language and Composition · Big Idea 4 Style: Comparisons and Figurative Language (Skill 7.A)

7.A Simile and the Explicit Comparison

A simile uses like or as to set two things next to each other without fusing them, letting a writer lend an argument only the traits it needs while leaving the rest behind.

A simile is an explicit comparison: this is like that. The word like, or as, keeps the two things separate even while it links them. That separateness is the whole trick. When an editorial says a new law works like a tourniquet, it is not claiming the law is a tourniquet. It is holding the law up next to a tourniquet so the reader can see one borrowed trait: emergency stoppage. Everything else about a tourniquet, including the damage it does below where it's tied, stays home unless the writer drags it in on purpose.

This is why her argument was like a locked door feels more careful than her argument was a locked door. The metaphor fuses the two and asks for agreement outright. The simile keeps them apart and invites the reader to test the comparison, to decide for themselves whether the door really is locked and why. That small distance, held open by like, is a kind of built-in hedge, and a sharp reader should notice when a writer is using it to control exactly how far a comparison goes.

A bare simile leaves the shared trait for the reader to guess, which is flexible but also loose. A writer can tighten it by naming the trait outright, as in the report landed like a verdict, final and unappealable. Naming closes off the other readings a bare simile would allow and locks the comparison to one point. That move sits right next to metaphor and analogy in the larger toolkit of figurative comparison: all three lay one picture over another, but simile is the version that never lets the two pictures become one.

Key terms

Simile
An explicit comparison using like or as that holds two things side by side without claiming they are the same.
Shared trait
The specific quality a simile transfers from one thing to the other, while leaving the rest of each thing behind.
Metaphor
A comparison that fuses two things by saying one is the other, asking for acceptance rather than testing.
Bare simile
A simile that does not name its shared trait, leaving the reader to infer which quality is meant.

Watch it explained

  1. How it worksHow does the word like hold two things side by side instead of fusing them into one?
  2. Worked exampleShow me which trait travels in the new law works like a tourniquet and which traits stay home.
  3. Going furtherWhat changes about a simile when the writer names the shared trait out loud?

Check yourself

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An editorial writes that a new law, passed after 9 years of debate, 'works like a tourniquet.' Which trait travels across, and which stays behind?

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