AP® English Language and Composition · The Exam: Section I, Multiple-Choice

Section I: Adding a Sentence

Adding a sentence means finding the one gap where it links backward and forward correctly, usually because a pronoun or transition word in the sentence points to something specific just before it.

A paragraph is a chain of links: each sentence picks up something from the one before it and hands off something to the one after it. A sentence being added has its own hooks, often a pronoun like this, they, or such, or a transition like however or as a result. Those hooks need an antecedent or a setup, and only one gap in the paragraph supplies it. That's why a sentence can be completely true and completely on-topic and still only work in one place: truth and topic don't fix a gap, but reference does.

To test a candidate sentence, read the sentence right before the gap and ask what the new sentence's opening word or phrase would have to point to. Then read the sentence right after the gap and ask whether it still makes sense once the new sentence sits in front of it. Both checks have to pass. A sentence can sound smooth going in and still break the connection coming out, because inserting it changes what the following sentence is now reacting to. Skipping the second check is the most common way to pick a plausible-looking wrong gap.

This question type sits alongside the other writing questions on the student draft, where you're also asked to judge transitions, combine sentences, or cut weak ones. All of them test the same skill: tracing how one sentence depends on its neighbors rather than judging sentences in isolation. Getting comfortable with 'what does this word point to' pays off across that whole set of writing questions, not just this one.

Key terms

antecedent
The earlier word or idea that a pronoun like this, they, or such refers back to.
candidate sentence
The sentence offered as an option to insert into one of the paragraph's gaps.
link
The logical connection between one sentence and the next, carried by reference words or transitions.
gap
A marked position in the paragraph where the candidate sentence might be inserted.

Watch it explained

  1. How it worksHow do you test a candidate sentence against the link before it and the link after it?
  2. Worked exampleWalk me through placing This means the country must convert whenever it deals with the rest of the world.
  3. Going furtherWhat changes when the sentence to be added opens with a pronoun like this or they?

Check yourself

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The sentence 'This means the country must convert whenever it trades abroad' is to be added to a paragraph about 3 rival measurement systems. Where can it go?

End of topic.