AP® English Literature and Composition · Unit 5

6.B Extended Metaphor and Which Traits Transfer (FIG-1.T)

An extended metaphor develops a single comparison across many lines by adding new details, each making a fresh claim rather than repeating the same one, while the poem quietly chooses which traits of the comparison to transfer and which to leave behind.

A metaphor states that one thing is another. An extended metaphor keeps that one comparison alive for a whole poem by feeding it new material: added images, similes, and specific details that all belong to the same vehicle. A poem comparing a marriage to a house does not just say 'marriage is a house' four times. It adds the rooms nobody uses, the door that swells in wet weather, the guttering they argued over. Each addition is a new claim about the marriage, so the metaphor accumulates meaning instead of restating it.

Any vehicle offers a whole bundle of possible traits, and a poem only ever transfers some of them. A grandmother compared to a lighthouse might take the lighthouse's reach, its record-keeping, its endurance through weather, while refusing the isolation or the automation a real lighthouse also has. That refusal is not an oversight. Readers are meant to notice what got left on the shore, because the missing traits shape the meaning as much as the chosen ones do.

Sit this metaphor next to the other devices in the unit: like personification, it depends on deciding exactly which qualities cross from one thing to another; like allusion, it asks a reader to track a reference across an entire text rather than one line. Watch what happens when a late detail stops fitting the vehicle, the way a river 'dug by hand' breaks a comparison that had been selling the career as natural and inevitable. That break is often the poem's real argument, arriving right when the metaphor seems most settled.

Key terms

extended metaphor
A single comparison developed across many lines or an entire poem through added details, images, and similes.
vehicle
The concrete image or thing used to represent the subject, such as the staircase standing for a life.
tenor
The real subject being described by the metaphor, such as the speaker's life in the staircase metaphor.
selective transfer
The way a comparison carries over only some traits of its vehicle while deliberately leaving others behind.

Watch it explained

  1. How it worksHow does an extended metaphor grow by adding details, similes and images to one comparison?
  2. How it worksHow do you work out which traits a comparison transfers and which it quietly refuses?
  3. Worked exampleWalk me through the staircase metaphor in 'Life for me ain't been no crystal stair'.
  4. Common mistakeWhy isn't an extended metaphor just the same metaphor repeated a few times?
  5. Going furtherWhat changes in an extended metaphor when one added detail stops fitting the vehicle?

Check yourself

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A poem compares a marriage to a house. Across 7 stanzas it adds the 6 rooms nobody uses, the door that swelled in wet weather, the guttering the couple argued about, and the survey nobody read before buying. Why is this more than the same metaphor repeated?

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